I just got this idea on a whim...jotted down immediately.Comments please :)
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“Who the HELL is He?”
“He’s just a friend from office! Cant I have friends?!?”
“Friend my foot! Then what were you doing in that F***ing coffee shop all snug an everythin...”
“We were chatting about work, that’s all!”
“Work eh?!? BullShit! I could see the look in your eyes…”
“That’s IT! I’ve had enough! In fact, I would much rather go out with Him than You!
“Oh ya! Go on, call him up now and profess your love for him!”
“In Fact, I think I Will!”
SLAM.
Silence.
A few minutes pass.
He dialed her number, Engaged tone.
“DAMN! I can’t believe she s actually calling him up! THE NERVE!”
She put down the receiver on the other end. It was engaged.
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3 comments:
not bad at all...
this short story does what it sets out to do...
love is the cause of all disaster :P
Love is root of all pain
( a modification of what Buddha said :P )
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